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tell me what u think of my Poem: its good i think:::::::::.....

 

i'm sorry for all the pain i brought you

and all the lies i told you

but there's one thing i'll never regret

and that's the love i gave you

no i didn't use you

and no i didn't cheat on you

i just think we have our differences

and we shouldn't share the same end

some relationships last forever

but i guess ours never did

ours was dangerously on the line anyways

so what's the point of making more pain

when we can end it now?

you know it's hard

no doubt about that

and i know you didn't really care

but we can still just be friends

i always thought you were just desperate

thats how they all end up with me

but you love, you were different

and sadly i just figured that out

please don't cry

there's no need for crying

everyone goes through the same pain

or so that's what i'm told


Posted on 08/07/2006 5:21 PM Visits: 34
dirtydozenboy: 08/07/2006 5:49 PM
its pretty good
mrsgood: 08/07/2006 7:22 PM
thats cool.i liked it!!!
seraphim: 08/07/2006 9:29 PM
i'm crying right now i was so vaery happy but now i'm upset couse i'm i the same boat
don't cry & don't be upset are storg words i hate those lins
supahottie: 08/08/2006 12:38 PM
wow. ur a good writer. that's a hard topic for a poem.
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